tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post9156786033647235573..comments2024-03-28T12:58:06.787+05:30Comments on Swati's World of Thoughts: Edge of the World : PoetrySwatihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02897535865417721338noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-66993352765826846942021-07-12T02:31:50.177+05:302021-07-12T02:31:50.177+05:30I enjoyed reading this so much. You have expressed...I enjoyed reading this so much. You have expressed everything in such simple lines, so beautifully. It is important for us to walk towards a happy life.Reubenna Duttahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02493663347295339963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-77766094310415101272021-07-12T01:08:09.409+05:302021-07-12T01:08:09.409+05:30nO MATTER HOW BAD THE WORLD is, theres always hope...nO MATTER HOW BAD THE WORLD is, theres always hope. As u mentioned in the end , we all need to work together to make this world a beautiful place.Milanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09229587478066248865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-16632558988030472932021-07-12T01:07:24.843+05:302021-07-12T01:07:24.843+05:30this is heart-felt emotions.this is heart-felt emotions.Radhika Jindalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00168798603390549004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-90341526522630412762021-07-11T22:20:41.116+05:302021-07-11T22:20:41.116+05:30Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem this i...Such a beautiful and thought provoking poem this is. Indeed the world is <br />Coming to its edge and hopefully we be able to push and turn things around. Amen. Hansa Kajariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16602302017743349257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-66911977203019375032021-07-11T21:20:37.625+05:302021-07-11T21:20:37.625+05:30Those are such simple lines but certainly impactfu...Those are such simple lines but certainly impactful Life can be easy if we work towards making it more happy than gloomy. Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08999438412780764601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-71050955393135385102021-07-11T20:06:26.820+05:302021-07-11T20:06:26.820+05:30I love prompts, they give us a way to express our ...I love prompts, they give us a way to express our emotions through words and explore our creativity. Absolutely loved reading this one and your take on this prompt :)Kavitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06005663875290700846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-15377723015088936872021-07-11T20:04:38.418+05:302021-07-11T20:04:38.418+05:30Such lovely words Swati. How beautifully you have ...Such lovely words Swati. How beautifully you have weaved them and put your thoughts in words. Indeed the world need to be filled with fun and not much of gloom. We should take control of our life and make it happy. Rakhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03676878388381130067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-48090927152506495812021-07-11T19:18:58.817+05:302021-07-11T19:18:58.817+05:30That’s very intriguing crisp read. The narration i...That’s very intriguing crisp read. The narration is crisp and unmask the bitter truth of the today's qorldBushrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18335901169818723708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-7910814308381708262021-07-11T17:16:14.607+05:302021-07-11T17:16:14.607+05:30If we all come together for the single goal of pea...If we all come together for the single goal of peace within and peace in the outer world then we will know that we have win. Beautiful thought in these poetic lines.MeenalSonalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17427385947855019585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-39107897861647818332021-07-11T14:41:47.713+05:302021-07-11T14:41:47.713+05:30When the bad and the evil gains an upper hand it i...When the bad and the evil gains an upper hand it is time for good to take the lead in setting the balance right. In Hindu philosophy too this is highlighted, in the form of the Avatars of Vishnu taking birth to set right the balance between good and evil.Sandy N Vyjayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17966161478297978550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-89672135738233830122021-07-11T14:29:55.195+05:302021-07-11T14:29:55.195+05:30Beautiful lines, Swati. You indeed have knack at c...Beautiful lines, Swati. You indeed have knack at creating magic by the words. No wonder this post is chose as Wow pick.<br />Dipikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04180193421246539533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-170736734280758602021-07-11T09:33:03.869+05:302021-07-11T09:33:03.869+05:30Reading this makes me feel like we've been liv...Reading this makes me feel like we've been living at the edge of the world for the longest time now. Does the good wins over evil happen only in stories? This gloom has to pass, soon. About time now. Varshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12690725907527097964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-73437384903060683412021-07-11T00:42:48.494+05:302021-07-11T00:42:48.494+05:30Wow, you have written this poem very beautifully. ...Wow, you have written this poem very beautifully. Loved it. Keep writing and best wishes Priyalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10344295199568985921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-35430065952761574802021-07-10T21:44:00.225+05:302021-07-10T21:44:00.225+05:30This was a such a bittersweet read, Swati. You sho...This was a such a bittersweet read, Swati. You showed us both sides of a situation, making us think. Let's not take this world to the edge!<br />Mayuri/SirimiriDeliciously Alivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17431992268355546378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-30068280351220211552021-07-10T19:41:56.701+05:302021-07-10T19:41:56.701+05:30oh .. I love this beautiful poetry. The choice of ...oh .. I love this beautiful poetry. The choice of word is just wow . I found this poem so inspiring, it is in our hands to make world a better placeHema Gayatrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08709231921430500278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-88285049967325096432021-07-09T18:29:11.531+05:302021-07-09T18:29:11.531+05:30You have beautifully penned down the every turning...You have beautifully penned down the every turning point when bad has upper hand over good things and that's the time to take a call and come forward to take the charge to amend the things.Archana Srivastavahttps://archusblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-53003148519787559552021-07-08T04:48:48.576+05:302021-07-08T04:48:48.576+05:30Wow you are so good with poem writing. yes, many t...Wow you are so good with poem writing. yes, many time it feels that this world with so much negativity and hopelessness but if we join our hands and try to make it a better place to live then things can change for better for future generation. Surbhi prapannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05354049410062322823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-72547111970157723212021-07-07T23:20:18.366+05:302021-07-07T23:20:18.366+05:30I loved the way you have written this poem, the po...I loved the way you have written this poem, the positivity says it all...it is in our hand to make this world a better place.Ruchi Mayank Vermahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08472845718314868188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-84612775812814721512021-07-07T22:23:46.589+05:302021-07-07T22:23:46.589+05:30Amen. It is a very thought provoking poem. When we...Amen. It is a very thought provoking poem. When we realize these things, then the world will be a much better place to live. Alpanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16230162081844874852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-9253907675300653922015-03-31T15:48:38.858+05:302015-03-31T15:48:38.858+05:30This is best positive thinking. Good. Live with it...This is best positive thinking. Good. Live with it and enjoy life as it is.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01495755310618699990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-873128684753708862015-03-30T10:59:47.453+05:302015-03-30T10:59:47.453+05:30Beautiful Swati :) Beautiful Swati :) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-31059047709419271272015-03-25T22:19:04.016+05:302015-03-25T22:19:04.016+05:30Thank you so much for the appreciationThank you so much for the appreciationSwatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02897535865417721338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7315698660011704337.post-28842572592496013852015-03-24T23:44:26.080+05:302015-03-24T23:44:26.080+05:30Wow! Amazing! Loved your take on the prompt!Wow! Amazing! Loved your take on the prompt!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01539875895500075209noreply@blogger.com